Storyboard

Here is my first storyboard. It is pretty rough, the pictures are not detailed but i have my shots sorted and ordered as well as having a good idea on my locations.

I need to work out what text I want on the screen and how i want it to be shown.
I need to find a lead character that can act fairly well and fits my characters look (stereotypically male)

Here is my storyboard scanned in: